What do you think of my rough copy of my song?

I just wrote this in like 1 hour. I still need to work on the
structure and rhyming a little bit. But it's a rough copy. It's called
"so real". Any suggestions on how to improve the song would be great.
This is a rough copy so it isn't perfect but i like it a an
accomplishment (this is the First song I've ever wrote).

(verse 1)
everyone knows
the douche can't feel
no one knows fakeness feels so real
now everyone
stand aside
While we wash away his life
loving smile
hate taste of tears
Aren't nice opinions here
but I know
what those things make
never knew realness felt so fake

(chorus 1)
Anxiety
please save me
comedians won't leave me
never knew fakeness felt
so real....

(verse 2)
they make up
stupid rules
to control who is cool
revenge on someone
I don't know
Will get rid of the snow
do not blink
if you dare
while looking at my hair
smell of bad
social skills
get picked up fast by kids

(chorus 2)
Anxiety
please save me
comedians won't leave me
never knew fakeness felt
so real...

so real...

(guitar solo)

(bridge)
Every poison apple
had a gummy worm
despite my mindset
I'm still a germ
stupid people don't stand a chance
in this world

(chorus 3/outro)
Anxiety
Please save me
comedians won't leave me
never knew fakeness felt so
Anxiety
please save me
Comedians won't leave me
never knew fakeness felt..
never knew fakeness felt..
never knew fakeness felt..
never knew fakeness felt..

so real......